in 12 measly pages is absolutely overwhelming. Let me clarify, these are 12 8.5x11 pages WITH several pictures on each page. So it's really only 2-3 pages of writing. How do I tell the kidney story without making Herb sound like he's on his deathbed? How do hit all the general information they need to know without sounding cookie-cutter and blah?
I will be SO GLAD when this is finished. :)